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    dots Submission Name: GOD what you mean to medots
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    Author: JAILBYRD22
    ASL Info:    22/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 9/11/12
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsGOD what you mean to medots
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    You have given me back my sanity
    Again made me believe in humanity
    I now know what is truely real
    For you have shown me how to feel
    Before I had chosen to simply cope
    I have now, a new sense of hope
    For a way out I use to pray
    Instead i slept the days away
    You have shown me a different way
    And from your side I will never stray
    Everything that once was dark and grey
    Now I see there is a light in every day
    I once was a pawn in a game
    Nothing I do will ever be the same
    By my actions I will prove this true
    It is the only way to fully thank you




    Submitted on 2011-03-10 01:52:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Seems like the person found it's muse and it's major reason to live.

    Should be categorized as a love type of poem since it has that feeling standing out so much with depth.

    Makes me think about the person who saves the life of another and in return the one being saved feels obligated to give back all that they can in relationship, friendship or whatever it may be that is emotionally captured and brought on by not having enough words to describe how much such a person means to your life.

    It has it's glow.

    I can clearly tell the person feels like a somebody due to the others deed and actions of outstanding assistance or help of some kind with a understanding of things like no one else before.

    Rexsan

    | Posted on 2011-03-15 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]


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