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    dots Submission Name: PHYSCOdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 556
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    Bytes: 808



    Description:
       something i just started not finished


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    dotsPHYSCOdots
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    insanity of physco
    waking up in the morning seeing the blood in the hall from the murder scene

    blood dripping from my k nines like a fountain pen
    immortally walking around with a S on my chest,
    seeing my life through that foggy pyrex

    psychopathically crazy
    Minnesotan grown
    where the winters are tortuous
    drugs are notorious

    im sick beyond sick
    all my screws are loose
    white girls altering my personality
    no way to reach me
    my head is in the clouds
    enjoying the scenery
    question my sanity
    I’m addicted to the blood bath brutality

    psychopathically crazy
    Minnesotan grown
    where the winters are tortuous
    drugs are notorious




    Submitted on 2011-03-10 13:08:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this actaully kind of made me think of ICP. this really sounds like something they would write. its a good start, if you really want to finish it. if not that its still a good piece
    | Posted on 2011-03-10 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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