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    dots Submission Name: yes usdots
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    Author: stingwater
    ASL Info:    19/female/SFV
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Prose/Them
    Total Views: 556
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 91



    Description:
       not much of anything. but its life and thats everything.


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    dotsyes usdots
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    pull
    push
    take
    give
    gain
    make
    relieve




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