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    Author: ShadowsnLights
    ASL Info:    25 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 71/107/66
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Misc/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 512
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 938



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       A love so great...


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    You are my world.
    You gave me life.
    You fill me with joy.
    You say all the things that need to be heard.
    There is no artifice behind your motives.
    There is no love greater than yours.
    There is only trust.
    There is only comfort.

    As I remember the circumstances of our lives that brought us to this point, I see all the strength in you...

    As I remember all the stories you shared with me in our late night talks, I feel your strength transferred into me...

    Sure you weren't always there for me, but how could you teach me something that you were lacking in your own life? The one who should have given you what you gave me...

    You gave me security, confidence, strength, hope, love, trust...

    For all that I am now, will ever be later or was in the past...

    I thank you...

    Mother.




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      Beautiful!
    | Posted on 2011-03-21 00:00:00 | by sjahangir | [ Reply to This ]
      initially I thought you were talking about God, and then I thought you were talking about your lover and then I saw Mother... that shows how much they mean to us all eh...that's love.
    | Posted on 2011-03-21 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats a heartwarming poem... of course mother stands for everything good in life. God blesses us with our mothers in the very beginning.

    your poem makes me think that world is not so bad afterall when God is looking after us and guiding us in the form of mother.
    | Posted on 2011-03-17 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]


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