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    dots Submission Name: Kitschdots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1087/407/116
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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       Pandemically phatic futurity fatidic


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    dotsKitschdots
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    Wanderlust warlock blaspheme rapacity
    Obsequious diligence pier pair appearance
    Obstreperously vituperative vociferous tenacity
    Consortium eclectic synectics concurrence
    In extremis extremity cantilever capacity
    Citadel clairvoyance pilaster conveyance
    Inductive integration interpolative audacity
    Derivative factor derivational appliance
    Futurity fatidic's laconic sagacity
    Aseity veracity cacophony compliance
    Accidence ambience aesthetics opacity
    Acoustical articulation intonational occurrence
    Apomixes anabolics histophysiological mendacity
    Epistemological somatalogy syntactics refulgence
    Refractive reflective semantics complicity
    Hephestian dialectics Hegelian effulgence
    Linguistic syntax synaptic intensity

    totally tangential




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      It is a mind game too... it is an obstreperous blast of words... but what is kitsch... i really dont know and there seems to be difference of opinion among dictionaries

    | Posted on 2011-03-23 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      Kitsch is a piece that commands attention and calls out to not be ignored or skimmed over.
    Unique on it's own.
    And to be honest it will have to be looked at sometime again later on.Just to click it piece by piece together than I did the first time as of reading it line by line while pausing in between.Now there is the challenge it give the reader to recite it with full understanding while letting it roll off the tongue.

    Also what plays throughout this entire piece is the wording structure and placement that has words of the same beginning of lettering side by side.A, a, a here or perhaps the two O's at the 1st quarter of it.

    It is rare as of form and there is some sort of decreased measurement of writers of todays world who can produce something of this nature.
    It is certainly not something one should read only once.

    The world as we all know is being done before the eyes in only one hundred forty five words with precise word mechanics.

    Inductive integration interpolative audacity

    ^ The line alone can recall memories to an American citizen about the immigration issue here or maybe it's only me.Most likely dealing with mathematics for sure though for some kind.

    Only a fine writer can produce such a piece.

    Again, will have to be looked at again.

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    | Posted on 2011-03-19 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      You should have titled this "A tail of two Citys".

    I thought it funny. Every odd numbered line ends with "city" except for the last which ends "sity". OK it's a stretch of a catch and subsequent comment from a warped mind like mine but that's what happens when you open your work to be viewed by the general public.
    | Posted on 2011-03-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Literary wizardry at it's best.
    | Posted on 2011-03-19 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]


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