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    dots Submission Name: The Deserted Ticdots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Alternate title I almost went with: Sands of Time. Might shed some light on the metaphor.


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    dotsThe Deserted Ticdots
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    The sand took you away
    It found where we are weak
    And the sand is here to stay
    Through the sand I will seek

    And I'm reaching for your hand
    Wherever it may be
    Though I don't understand
    Why ever you left me

    But I'm not leaving
    I'll search and I'll pry
    May end up bleeding
    But I'm always going to try

    And I will always care
    Confide your soul in me
    Whether or not you're there
    Though I'd like you to be

    And so I'll navigate these sands
    Til my heart no longer beats
    And do all that I can
    Until our paths again meet




    Submitted on 2011-03-19 11:49:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      navigating the sand as in hour glass sand...time away from you...it is hard--you left me and i am still here holding on to time...counting it off until i see you again...

    i will not leave...i will wait until your time away from me runs out...and i can flip the hour glass over and count the time with you again.
    | Posted on 2011-03-19 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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