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    dots Submission Name: talking the talk.dots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 673
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       Hm. That's me, talking the talk and not waking the walk.
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    When you're all talk
    & no show
    their respect just goes
    Out the window
    so stick to your words
    & keep them true
    or else it'll all
    Fall back on you.




    Submitted on 2011-03-19 19:00:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very good. I try to always back up my words, no matter how stupid they were. It sure leads to trouble sometimes tho.
    | Posted on 2012-11-22 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      Very true and wise. I will stick to u bro. Regards jm
    | Posted on 2011-03-23 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]
      True dat!

    & I say that with all sincerity. People tend to waver in what they say depending on people's responses & that just comes with a whole lot of complicating. You can only be true to yourself, so if you do that then you'll be good. & at least that way when the [censored] hits the fan, you're cleaning up after a genuine attempt/feeling/belief/whathaveyou.

    :)
    | Posted on 2011-03-19 00:00:00 | by Santi | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a spur poem that advises and brings to recollection that you should stand for what you speak of, mostly important when it is of good meaning.

    I could keep this type of writing in my pocket, embedded inside or on a locket for it's special meaning of how the person should always keep a promise or be truthful at a righteous level.
    And that people will leave you and move on if you wound up taking them for granted based on actions and speaking of things.

    Things can backfire, which you want to prevent from happening or taking course.

    Makes me want to focus on being the better person to take this seriously than the person who does not understand this.

    Rexsan
    | Posted on 2011-03-19 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      this is such a truth...

    and once the words start falling back on themselves..the poems crumble,
    and we the poet have nothing but a handful of frustrated syllables

    we are squeezing with disappointment...

    and with truth comes respect...whether they like your words or not...they must respect your right to say them..

    i like this short piece..it says lots, concisely.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-03-19 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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