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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1084/406/116
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 719
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    Bytes: 526



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    The acoustics of apostrophe
    The dharma of causticity
    The latent blatant flagrancy
    and pompous cryptic vagrancy

    The tractiveness of warranty
    The gumption of audacity
    The gemma schema lechery
    And piquant puissant poignancy

    The quintessence of affinity
    The cognizance of acuity
    The estranged ensemble coventry
    And intrinsic endemic inherency


    Interpretationally translational
    Triteness thew




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      *Gets out a dictionary* Damn, I know what most of these words mean but for the life of me, I have almost no idea what you're talking about. And I can't dismiss it cause it falls so easily off the tongue. Based soully off the first line, "The acoustics of apostrophe", i'd say its about nothing. Or the something in nothing. Or something.

    Your guarantee is correct, I have been mind fucked. You win (if it ever was a thing to win). That's my first impression.
    | Posted on 2013-11-04 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, I like this one. Rhythmically it's fairly smooth for the first 2 stanzas, but the rhythm derails in S3 and makes new tracks to finish in a new direction. Still it's something that my poor brain can absorb quite readily and I thank you for that. :) Chris
    | Posted on 2011-06-26 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! ,,i liked this... you are becoming musical,,,, i enjoyed the rhythm and the beat here that felt totally unimposed.

    | Posted on 2011-03-23 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]


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