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    dots Submission Name: The Painful Process of Letting Godots
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    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Breakups suck...


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    dotsThe Painful Process of Letting Godots
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    In every thought I had of you
    I never thought that we'd be through
    And every tear drop that I cried
    Just washed away your lies

    I only wish that you could see
    The hurt and pain you've caused in me
    I only loved you pure and true
    And you just ripped my heart in two

    I've lied in darkness, up all night
    Just trying to get my feelings right
    And though I'm broken and alone
    I know I'll someday find a home

    So as I write these words to you
    I hope that one day they'll sink through
    And when you're with him you will say
    That you will never be okay...




    Submitted on 2011-03-21 14:53:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Jolly good writing bro. I am glad to see that some people can write a poem that rhymes, and still make sense of it.


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    | Posted on 2012-02-17 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]


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