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    dots Submission Name: missing piecesdots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsmissing piecesdots
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    I feel like there's something missing inside of me why cant you come back to me and make our life together. i feel like something is missing in side of me why did you have to go?
    you were a part of me.
    why cant you come back your the missing piece to me.
    why cant you come back to me?




    Submitted on 2011-03-21 17:58:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Just keep in mind that every boy that hurts you now is just a lesson for the future...You will have 100's more heart breaks..just pick yourself up and brush it off and do not give these guys a second thought...No man is worth your tears...the one who is will never make you cry :)
    | Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by Bloodlust86 | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a bit repetative but other than that it's good. BTW, this person doesn't deserve you
    | Posted on 2011-03-25 00:00:00 | by TheInvisible | [ Reply to This ]
      poetry is a good outlet for this kind of hurt. go ahead, let it out
    | Posted on 2011-03-22 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]
      i see the title and expect more than i read...that made me disappointed. you seem to write bout love and hurt a lot though, makes me curious who you write about and why it's mostly filled with pain.
    | Posted on 2011-03-22 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]


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