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    dots Submission Name: Desperationdots
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    Author: sjahangir
    Elite Ratio:    1.43 - 3/4/5
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsDesperationdots
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    With the serene breeze it has to to offer,
    I want you to amplify the night with Chanel No. 5.

    Lay I tonight, thinking of my life - a passionless calamity,
    only can calm me your elegance and beauty.

    Night is known for its secrecy,
    for every soul is in deep sleep,
    extend to and wake me up with compassion in privacy.

    Make me feel the coolth of your chocolate skin and the figure outlining silk,
    certain I am they will taste better then the most creamiest milk.

    I will address you my dear with the name Natasha,
    for it has romantic reminiscence of the smell of Caffe Mocha.

    It is time for me to come back to reality,
    I tried my level best to write this piece with decency.





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      entertaining...love the last line especially! and it has a touch of humor too. do you rap? this could be rap lyrics, you know.
    | Posted on 2011-03-27 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]


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