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    dots Submission Name: Ganguly Sahib is his namedots
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    Author: sjahangir
    Elite Ratio:    1.43 - 3/4/5
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsGanguly Sahib is his namedots
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    Ganguly Sahib is his name,
    he states 'h' as 'heche',
    while he thinks he sounds western and to him that is fame.

    He is very connected, is what he proudly states,
    still he sits as a customer service guy, earning one of the job markets low end rates.

    When he speaks about girls, it is funny and fabulous
    someone else speaks in the same light, it is offensive and nonreligious.

    He can make fun of someone, it is of-course with good will and humorous,
    when the one confronts him in true anger, the person is wrong and indecorous.

    Not only that, the one in tone should be apologetic,
    and if the one chooses not to so, double standard Ganguly will give him a religious lecture on forgiveness and make the one look pathetic.

    Boy o boy, I can go on,
    but let me end this fabulous poem with the phrase 'double standard'.




    Submitted on 2011-03-22 21:04:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      .........eh? It was good as far as rythm and such goes, but I didn't understand it.....
    | Posted on 2011-03-26 00:00:00 | by TheInvisible | [ Reply to This ]


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