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    dots Submission Name: Brokendots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 504
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    dotsBrokendots
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    I thought I was in love with you
    till I looks in the mirror that when I knew that I was wrong. I was not in love with you but I did love you.
    it is time that I move on and leave you behind.




    Submitted on 2011-03-24 11:44:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short, sweet and to the point!! I love that in a poem. Don't get me wrong, I just don't have patience for those really looooooong poems! Now you just have to find something happy to write about.
    | Posted on 2011-03-26 00:00:00 | by TheInvisible | [ Reply to This ]


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