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    dots Submission Name: (explicit)ly pisseddots
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    Author: Di Re Rakord
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 130/125/30
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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       just angry, if u got a better way to let it out tell me.


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    Fuck you fuck this shit and all the words you spit.
    theyre bile and vile you just sound like a bitch.
    I wish youd drown in all the lies youve sewn, i wish youd burn with all the fires youve doomed.
    i want to tear out your heart and break your mind apart,
    rip out your soul and drag it down to hell.
    burn here with me and taste the hate well.




    Submitted on 2011-03-24 18:53:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      why so much hate? thank God for poetry...we have a place to channel are frustrations, hurts, and mixed up emotions. letting it out helps, you see. as said, move on to better things.. most of us have, at some point in our lives, done that; moved on with our lives when it halts for sometime due to such heartaches. Thank God for poetry.
    | Posted on 2011-03-25 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
      Eventually we are all "Highway to Hell" going to wind up there to be judged by a jury of our peers . For now though I feel your hurting yourself with this bitter desire for revenge . I know it's a natural human reaction to being mistreated , even justifiably so of the grand scheme of things , but caustic and acrid acerbity can really get you down despite its possible validity . My advice , tell her to be gone and never return , consider it a life lesson and move on , hopefully to better things . If you allow yourself to steep in the torment it's only going to hurt you . As for a better way to express this I'm sure the occasional FU$K YOU can be a release for the pain and somewhat cathartic indeed , but I advise don't wallow in it , move on to bigger and better .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2011-03-24 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      wow so original to be virginal in its inscription i barely felt a thing, then again passage of a good crap always feels good.
    | Posted on 2011-03-24 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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