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    dots Submission Name: Differentdots

    Author: DiNoDaNeH
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 10/17/31
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    Everyday we face a way to make a change. Most of us do nothing when this chance arises, mainly becasue we are afraid of what others will say. We want to shine in ways that is not right. We want to glow in the halls of school with the glamour and popularity. That is what we think is important...but in reality its not. What makes us glow is being different, and being our self. We can't let others judge us, all of us want to shine with glamour nad popularity, how is that being different. Shine and glow by beinf your own person, and not allowing others to intimidate you, becasue in the end, all of us will be like robots acting all the same.

    Submitted on 2011-03-25 06:40:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well said. who said following the crowd makes us feel any good? well i won't feel good. it is when i do things the way i want them and be me no matter what people say that makes me feel good cos in the end i live for me not for them...
    | Posted on 2011-03-27 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree. popularity is alot like the middle age church, although i am religious... bits all a way to become powerful, to put people behind you and feel supirior.. its also stupid and inconsiderate and just down right wrong!!!
    its all a teen ager can do to make them selves an outcast just so people wont try that bull poopie on you!!! i would no.. after all i was the goth girl in my school. and everyone called me a freak. they should have looked in the mirror
    (stops and takes a deep breath)

    so maby all the people who think they are kool should go to ego rehab....

    any way this is good... nice job. its a very descriptive way of saying that poularity is stupid. good for you
    | Posted on 2011-03-25 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]

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