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    dots Submission Name: aint slowing downdots

    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsaint slowing downdots

    im hitting the road hard this time
    making it known far and wide
    that this chick is leaving this place
    waved goodbye to all the disgrace
    wiped my tears and turned my face
    cant look back cause i aint got the time
    im whistling tunes and thumbing for rides
    got to make up for lost times
    got to find some new friends to call mine
    i aint been happy since i saw his face
    he changed my demeanor
    he tried to rearrange my face
    so low to the ground, ive got rocks in my face
    cant slow down, dont know how
    im a fast paced woman
    running away when i aint winning
    you just gotta let me leave
    cause i really dont want to cause any scenes
    cant be tied down to any man
    got to go out and make my own way
    so independent some men cant stand it
    well this road looks like a good place for me
    dont mind if i break down you see
    theirs adventure round every corner
    theirs danger in standing still
    chains have ways of breaking through
    so eat my dust yall
    watch me run on down the road
    cause this time i aint turning around
    this time i aint slowing down.

    Submitted on 2011-03-25 16:30:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I loved your attitude specially the recognition of the fact that still can be much more damaging than getting up and running.

    This is a bold announcement, one can feel the boiling powere in your words...

    yes, go ahead, make a mark for yourself and do not forget to quicken your pce each time somebody tries to stop you....
    | Posted on 2011-03-26 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      I have read more than a few of your posts and though I know this has little to do with your poetry , I applaud your decision . I hope you make a clean getaway . Good luck !

    | Posted on 2011-03-25 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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