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aint slowing down

Author: scardnscared
ASL Info:    25/ DFW
Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585 /498 /311
Words: 209
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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aint slowing down

im hitting the road hard this time
making it known far and wide
that this chick is leaving this place
waved goodbye to all the disgrace
wiped my tears and turned my face
cant look back cause i aint got the time
im whistling tunes and thumbing for rides
got to make up for lost times
got to find some new friends to call mine
i aint been happy since i saw his face
he changed my demeanor
he tried to rearrange my face
so low to the ground, ive got rocks in my face
cant slow down, dont know how
im a fast paced woman
running away when i aint winning
you just gotta let me leave
cause i really dont want to cause any scenes
cant be tied down to any man
got to go out and make my own way
so independent some men cant stand it
well this road looks like a good place for me
dont mind if i break down you see
theirs adventure round every corner
theirs danger in standing still
chains have ways of breaking through
so eat my dust yall
watch me run on down the road
cause this time i aint turning around
this time i aint slowing down.

Submitted on 2011-03-25 16:30:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I loved your attitude specially the recognition of the fact that still can be much more damaging than getting up and running.

This is a bold announcement, one can feel the boiling powere in your words...

yes, go ahead, make a mark for yourself and do not forget to quicken your pce each time somebody tries to stop you....
| Posted on 2011-03-26 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
  I have read more than a few of your posts and though I know this has little to do with your poetry , I applaud your decision . I hope you make a clean getaway . Good luck !

| Posted on 2011-03-25 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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