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    dots Submission Name: The Equilibriumdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Equilibriumdots

    Where you walk upon this path
    Set between each moment of deliberation
    The seconds in contestant; expound
    In each grain of sand the footprint of your passing

    Ire; it is on confounding thoughts, and speculation
    Brings the sole of your feet, to naught
    And you wondered, as you wandered, between the fences and boundaries
    Who set those gates, those barriers, you always seek to pass

    Did you extol them in electric fingertips
    Say you should quiver so ecstatic on the burdens of their sensual-ness
    Or did you, in your harness of dreams, speak with them
    A language of succinct soul and tempo esoteric


    I am ground to dust, by joy
    And between the mill stones of hate and love
    Should I find the grist to give me an anchor
    On which terminology should I cling to dust in dust

    Do you know the passion behind your lips
    As it trembles within their million cells
    While processed in aching poignancy; transcribes
    To your in drawn breath, at the speed of light

    It is a searing moment, etched, upon your soul
    As from it, to you and through, you; it flows
    And every ounce of it’s consequence
    You could not write, though it take a billion years

    To describe the word, you felt

    Where you walk upon this path
    Set between each moment of deliberation
    The seconds in contestant; expound
    In each grain of sand the footprint of your passing

    And I am ground to dust, by joy

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      OK, your pieces are haunting and eloquent and symbolic and epic. People must not comment because they are at a loss for words!

    A lot going on here and warrants another read and provokINg thoughts ensue!

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