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Author:	submarine
Elite Ratio:	2.4 - 128/91/45
Words:	84

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How can you live with yourself?
To let love go like this,
Pretending to just be,
Living a life that is empty.

How can you ask me?
To not feel suddenly
To erase all the memories,
Taking away a part of me.

Can you imagine us apart?
Living our lives
Only thinking of the past
Hoping it could have been.

Can you go on forever?
Knowing you gave up on love
The one thing worth having
That you’ll never have.

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love...we sure cannot live without it! this is a beautiful piece...good work.
| Posted on 2011-03-27 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.