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    Author: submarine
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    How can you live with yourself?
    To let love go like this,
    Pretending to just be,
    Living a life that is empty.

    How can you ask me?
    To not feel suddenly
    To erase all the memories,
    Taking away a part of me.

    Can you imagine us apart?
    Living our lives
    Only thinking of the past
    Hoping it could have been.

    Can you go on forever?
    Knowing you gave up on love
    The one thing worth having
    That you’ll never have.




    Submitted on 2011-03-27 01:19:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      love...we sure cannot live without it! this is a beautiful piece...good work.
    | Posted on 2011-03-27 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]


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