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    dots Submission Name: Loving Lifedots
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    Author: ShadowsnLights
    ASL Info:    25 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 71/107/66
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsLoving Lifedots
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    I remember the day I was told...

    "You're a low life. You disgust me. Get a life you ugly bitch!" :D LOL

    At the time it really hurt me! It cut me to my core! But as time passed and life taught me more about myself... I realized, that all that my brother was saying... Well, he was really saying it to himself... He was projecting himself onto me...

    But despite all the sexual/mental abuse... He is my brother. I love him. I hate what he did. But I don't hate him...

    So now I live, care free and happy. I'm in a new city, enjoy a new lease on life. He nearly destroyed me. But I got out of that town, that was my world for the longest time... I was so empty inside... I wanted to die!

    Not anymore! :D

    I wanna live to the fullest!




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      This is a very healthy attitude,... you are so forgiving, oh this is incredible but the best thing is: you are happy and satisfied and got the life you wanted... of independence and a bit of carelessness.

    For the first time, i have seen/read anyone forgiving these kind of things in this seemingly easy going way... but deep down we all know, it is not easy.

    you did the best thing.
    | Posted on 2011-03-29 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]


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