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I will


Author: Rain
ASL Info:    22/F/Idaho
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I will



Deep in my heart,
I'm longing to know
why you search my soul
To see what no one else has?

There's a tug of war occuring,
and the battles on
the only way to win, is to give up control
to you...my God.

You're here to help
during my ups and downs.
You know my longings,
my hearts desires,

Yet you I have forsaken.
But no longer.

I will bow down
before your feet
to worship.




Submitted on 2011-03-27 13:41:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Simplistic in its delivery but powerful in its meaning. We have all questioned that's the gift we have to think and question everything. To sometimes go against the nature of being human. Never fear it always does work out. Follow your heart and soul no matter what's true or isn't just keep hope no matter where you find it. It helps with the darkest of days no matter who you believe is watching over us or isn't. Just love the experience of being here and embrace every moment.

" Slainte mhor agus a h-uile beannachd duibh "
Good health and every good blessing to you!

| Posted on 2011-03-31 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]


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