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    dots Submission Name: For/to Grandpadots

    Author: Mieko
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 253/209/99
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsFor/to Grandpadots

    His eyes...

    I want to feel a rush.
    I want to feel my heart lift like a bird passing through city bridges,
    the wide open air as colorful as a newborn's sky-painted eyes.
    I feel so free, that I don't need anyone else.

    I don't need anyone,
    I don't need.
    I don't.

    Do you hear it?

    His voice, those eyes...

    The sound of my
    Corresponding up to my thoughts as I reach for the
    Backspace, backspace, backspace...

    I don't long for the days when I'll be held in someone's arms,
    I regret the days I could have held your hand.
    I see those days as a blot on my history, a little terror.
    Those eyes...
    I know most people suggest that one move on from such things as past images.
    But I can't discount them as if they never happened.
    If they never happened, I would be emptier than I am now.
    Or would I?

    His voice, those eyes, his leathery white skin...

    Submitted on 2011-03-28 00:22:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this is quite a poem...

    "if they never happened i would emptier than i am now"

    "or would i?"

    if only i would have held his hand a time or two, let him know i loved him...now i not only feel lonliness, i feel guilt and regret...

    "i don't want to be held in someone else's arms/
    i want to backspace backspace backspace"

    and retype my life with more of his words and expressions in it...

    this shows a great longing and love...

    i just like the way it is laid out...as well as the content...it is a moving poem.

    | Posted on 2011-04-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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