Love has fulfilled your life and the life is fully lived with the true and immaculate love at present and it is going to provide the wonderful and the most cherished memories for tomorrow. Another great write Ron.
Was just browsing through your postings and wouldn't you know I'd stop to comment on the first love poem I came across :)
As always, you have a way of making me feel the words.
It is indeed the simple things about love that mark their place in our hearts... like the holding of hands, or just waking up by the one who makes your everyday a happy one, just by being there.
wow! i really liked this piece! its very hallmark-like, but in a really good and pure way. its a very tender piece full of contentment and joy. the poem really got to me...ya know? it speaks to that which i long for- true love.
the gentleness with which you approach and execute this piece is excellent. the rhythm is wonderful and the imagery is very solid. it's an extolling of that which is dearest to man -love!
i am also fond of the message. the carpe diem of romance, as it were. to live for today, to live to the fullest, to live all for her each moment. killer! but the enjambment of tomorrow never coming gives this piece layers and fullness. really well done.
i love your style will will make my way back again. i would love to get some comments from you as well. i've been on the site for 5 years, but out of the 5 years i've only written 5 months. i went 3 years w/o writing anything and therefore, consider myself a novice.