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My dearly beloved

Author: Dark Dann
ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78 /67 /53
Words: 108
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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My dearly beloved

Can you open your eyes

and look into the sky?

Feel the warmness inside

This heart of mine?

That belongs to you,

My dearly beloved.

1,000 suns

Sing lullabies

Straight to your ears

Straight to your heart.

They will whisper of me,

And all my love.

That belongs to you;

My dearly beloved.

In my life there's no one like you.

So sweet and fine; so special and kind,

You're one of a kind

My dearly beloved.

You're an angel fallen from the sky

And sent into my life.

Submitted on 2011-03-29 03:40:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Great poem it makes me feel happy because it reminds my of my beloved.
| Posted on 2011-06-10 00:00:00 | by madsmurph99 | [ Reply to This ]

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