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    dots Submission Name: My dearly beloveddots
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    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 610
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsMy dearly beloveddots
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    Can you open your eyes

    and look into the sky?

    Feel the warmness inside

    This heart of mine?

    That belongs to you,

    My dearly beloved.

    1,000 suns

    Sing lullabies

    Straight to your ears

    Straight to your heart.

    They will whisper of me,

    And all my love.

    That belongs to you;

    My dearly beloved.

    In my life there's no one like you.

    So sweet and fine; so special and kind,

    You're one of a kind

    My dearly beloved.

    You're an angel fallen from the sky

    And sent into my life.




    Submitted on 2011-03-29 03:40:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great poem it makes me feel happy because it reminds my of my beloved.
    | Posted on 2011-06-10 00:00:00 | by madsmurph99 | [ Reply to This ]


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