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Walk the talk

Author: sjahangir
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Walk the talk

Walk the talk,
before talk the walk,
or the talk will one day walk you out.

I talked and talked,
thrashing him and her,
this and that.

I proudly said,
he is wrong,
the idea is crap.

Years later,
I have done it all.

Submitted on 2011-03-29 14:11:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is interesting for sure although i not sure i understand. maby you could use words like that and you... good job
| Posted on 2011-03-29 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]

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