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    dots Submission Name: Dreamers and Dreamsdots
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    Author: Maskannai
    ASL Info:    28/Female/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 214/184/78
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       I was having another one of my moments of sudden thought and had to get it written down before it scattered from my head and was lost to the wind.. There is no actual personal story behind what created this, other than the fact that I am a dreamer, but I believe that all writers and artists of all kinds are dreamers in their own way, else how could they create such fantastical visions and alterations of reality..


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    dotsDreamers and Dreamsdots
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    With all the breath in me
    I'll raise a hand
    and lay a gentle kiss on my palm
    then blow so gently
    and send it flying to you;

    You've always had a way with words
    in simple ways
    and yet so complicated
    I struggle to understand
    or comprehend their meaning;

    Like when I asked you about butterflies,
    you chuckled at me
    then spouted some complicated answer
    about the meaning of life
    compared to fragile wings;

    I know there is a caring person
    hidden deeply within yourself,
    but I fail to see the how
    of getting over the walls you've built
    so we can live our happily ever after dream;

    Together we make an interesting pair,
    you with your logical skepticism
    and me with my visions and dreams.
    Do we really fit together at all,
    or are we both dreaming of some fantasy?

    I shall say this to your introspection
    that I will always believe in dreams
    because that is what holds life together,
    and what would life be
    without dreamers?




    Submitted on 2011-03-30 09:18:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yes i really like this piece too...

    opposites attract and balance each other out...the dreamer and the realist...

    the one who thinks outside the box and the one who thinks in terms of black and white...

    and trying to move each other in the opposite direction is half the fun...

    and once there is movement, there is hope of a blending...

    "logical skepticism vs dreams" what a great clash..

    like the wording in this...

    life does fly on fragile wings...just like the butterfly.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-03-30 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      During life, never stop dreaming.
    No one and I mean no one can take away your dreams.

    Reality is wrong, even with it's atrocities and we have to accept reality but dreams are so for real.

    But I have to remind myself that the only things that can come to a sleeping man is dreams.

    I thought your description was on the bulls eye for this.

    Life is full of beauty. Notice it. Notice the bumble bee, the small child, and the smiling faces. Smell the rain, and feel the wind. Live your life to the fullest potential, and fight for your dreams.

    Dreams are like stars...you may never touch them, but if you follow them they will lead you to your destiny.

    And you are right, an artist is a dreamer consenting to dream of the actual world.

    It's not the size of the dreamer, it's the size of the dream.

    I felt it was a warm read of a excellent write, could bring on deep thought...Maybe even a daydream.

    Rexsan
    | Posted on 2011-03-30 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]


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