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    dots Submission Name: Speak No Evildots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       General poem, just thought about playing around with words a little.


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    dotsSpeak No Evildots
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    My soul has been tainted,
    With the evil man do;
    Conscience half fainted,
    And these thoughts runny,
    Just like the flu.

    If my life is borrowed,
    So is everyone else's;
    I go with death,
    Like bone and marrow,
    And bad romances.

    Sometimes I sit and listen,
    As the world whispers nonsense;
    I witness ignorance,
    As it is spread,
    Without a conscience.

    The world has taught me wrong,
    Yet I fed from the lies and critiques,
    Mouths kept yapping on,
    Like an annoying faucet leak.

    I remained upheaval,
    And my soul's renewal;
    Was a gift from the heavens,
    For my mind;
    Speaks no evil.




    Submitted on 2011-03-30 22:32:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you see, speaking no evil is a gret idea that we often neglect... if someone wants to turn around his life, he should speak only positive and polite words... things WILL change/.

    Bitter words can turn around ones life too... into the gutter.

    so despite all the provocations, if you are at peace with yourself.. you cant do better..
    | Posted on 2011-03-31 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]


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