satirical. I enjoyed it, because satyrical is my type of humor(or at least my favorite) muahah "Honestly Iím so sorry My chopsticks Just happened To pierce His brown eyes To the point He was blinded (Blue eyes Are so much Prettier)" that was my favorite part! keep it up!
hmmm...an intersting write ...lol..though i like it...there is some sense in here well i read it that way..the line about having someone snap back at you...though i wish you could tie the fortune cookie part in better...that'ed rock...smiles ange
It pretty neat...stream of consciousness...Some parts rhyme very well...and its kind freaky...my style exactly. It's good! U picked an interesting words...and interesting way to put them...Well, u were really bored? heehee...just kidding, I do like it. Good Job!