Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Everything's Okay (A Poem To My Lover)dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/806/391
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1031
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 634



    Description:
       dedicated to the love of my life J.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsEverything's Okay (A Poem To My Lover)dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Can you tell me how to reach for the stars
    Because everyone says it isn't impossible
    Can you show me the road to success
    I must have turned on the wrong road


    Even with ups and downs
    You're by my side
    No matter what I do, I'm with you
    And that's enough for me
    Even when it gets hard
    You never let down your guard
    And say everything’'s ok


    Dressing up to impress you
    You laugh and say you love me either way
    Those little moments I worship
    Cos' it can be easily taken away




    Submitted on 2011-04-01 22:08:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    190233

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    AI written by poetotoe
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Love written by saartha
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Cover written by saartha
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Ache written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    written by Daniel Barlow
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Fasade written by jackz
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Carry written by saartha
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Shi written by ShyOne
    untitled written by ShyOne
    True Death written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry