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Everything's Okay (A Poem To My Lover)

Author: Cordell
ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
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Words: 103
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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dedicated to the love of my life J.

Everything's Okay (A Poem To My Lover)

Can you tell me how to reach for the stars
Because everyone says it isn't impossible
Can you show me the road to success
I must have turned on the wrong road

Even with ups and downs
You're by my side
No matter what I do, I'm with you
And that's enough for me
Even when it gets hard
You never let down your guard
And say everything’'s ok

Dressing up to impress you
You laugh and say you love me either way
Those little moments I worship
Cos' it can be easily taken away

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