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    dots Submission Name: Everything's Okay (A Poem To My Lover)dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 590/805/389
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 982
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       dedicated to the love of my life J.


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    dotsEverything's Okay (A Poem To My Lover)dots
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    Can you tell me how to reach for the stars
    Because everyone says it isn't impossible
    Can you show me the road to success
    I must have turned on the wrong road


    Even with ups and downs
    You're by my side
    No matter what I do, I'm with you
    And that's enough for me
    Even when it gets hard
    You never let down your guard
    And say everything’'s ok


    Dressing up to impress you
    You laugh and say you love me either way
    Those little moments I worship
    Cos' it can be easily taken away




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