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    dots Submission Name: "In The Wind"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
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    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    Description:
       Motorcycle enthusiasts call taking a trip on their bikes being "in the wind". This poem is about a strong and beautiful woman whose hobby is being "in the wind".


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    dots"In The Wind"dots
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    There's a special place on earth
    that's called being "in the wind"
    it's a place of carefree freedom
    that lifts the soul within.

    For an hour or a day
    there earthly spirits can fly
    on wheels that touch the earth
    and souls that touch the sky!

    They have a love affair,
    the carefree wind and she.
    It caresses her face and hair!
    There's no place she'd rather be!

    And here on Terra Firma,
    where countless feet have trod,
    She's a mistress to the wind,
    and rides in the breath of God!




    Submitted on 2011-04-02 09:34:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      there is freedom and carefree freedom...

    we are like the wind in our own minds sometimes...blowing in all direction..whatever way at the time...we move to it...

    like marionettes in a tornado..spinning, jumping, lunging at life...

    i really like the second stanza...the wheels that touch the sky and souls that touch the sky...

    there is something spiritual in this piece...but more of a soul's spirit...soul as in our humanness....

    another good one, my friend!

    you are so easy with your words...just a certain flow.


    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-19 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Very smooth and flowing, great piece Ron.

    While the winds play with my hair,
    white lines pass below,

    all my thoughts pf care,
    away from me, do flow.
    | Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      the wind can blow away your troubles.. at least for a moment.. when we have a "love affair" with it like the woman here..
    I think you just insipired a poem on wind.. hm..
    keep it up ..

    - Black Rose
    | Posted on 2011-04-05 00:00:00 | by Little Gal | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes indeed, the wind sure is a miracle of nature, and you have woven a story which combines its beauty, with another beauty.......very clever of you Ron.......haha....

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-04-05 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      to describe the wind as 'the breath of God'...wow!
    | Posted on 2011-04-03 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
      I doubt if the pleasures of motor cycle riding have ever been expressed with such charm!

    The wind is my favorite element...and a joy to experience,
    even when made by a machine.


    | Posted on 2011-04-02 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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