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    dots Submission Name: My Strengthdots
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    Author: DeathTone
    ASL Info:    32 / Male / United States
    Elite Ratio:    5.55 - 81/55/29
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 532
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    Description:
       I was going through a real rough time and this was a real change from my earlier writtings. my first time writting about a positive. My others like may you die and so on are complet oppisites of this write which is why i guess i love it so much. thank you and please comment on this post wheather good or bad.


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    dotsMy Strengthdots
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    My love is as deep as the sea
    And this love god created for me
    Not many are as blessed as I
    To have what I have without lie
    Angels rest on my side
    And his message I will abide
    The sweet kiss of love is freedom
    A taste of heaven and its kingdom
    Kids and a wife to call my own
    Blessings to keep not a loan
    Treasure these blessings each day
    For you never know when it will be taken away
    And you may never get it back
    For one day darkness will attack
    And your love and faith in god will protect you
    From all you need it to
    Voices whisper in your head
    Wanting you to feel dead
    Feel alone and without worth
    For you are of the earth
    In this is how evil wins
    To make you commit sins
    I have lost much, but am not lost
    I am surrounded by darkness, but I can see
    For the lord guides me
    My faith once weak is now strong
    And my faith is not wrong
    My family will return to me
    Because god wants it to be
    I am no longer surrounded by black
    For Jesus told the devil to get back
    I am free at last
    Forgiven has been my past




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      It's enlightening.The new direction of life abroad being closer to God is a subject that can be touching but never really something to shy away from.

    It's on a personal level but it can have a deep effect on someone who has been in the similar situation you are in with God as of being spiritually awaken, accepted and revitalized seeing a totally different world than things were being in the grip of darkness.

    Since it means a lot to you that you felt God played a huge part of this being produced then I would say it's beautiful because of that.
    It makes me think about how going to church doesn't make good Christians but having the right faith makes them loving in Gods eyes I believe.
    Although I am not religious I liked it.

    Poems of transformation and divinity of a human being who is intact with God is always special.
    Because the new light of that person who has found themselves lies in that piece.As of this.
    | Posted on 2011-04-04 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]


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