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    dots Submission Name: Oceandots
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    Author: aggy98
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    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsOceandots
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    The ocean
    Sometimes it is like a beautiful fairy
    Gliding across the sand
    Other times it is like a howling monster
    out for revenge.
    It lies in waiting, staying calm.
    People splash around in it
    Not realising it could turn on them at any moment.
    Then suddenly it happens.
    The monster lets lose it's rage
    Storming onto the shores
    Attacking the cliffs
    But eventually, stops.
    It goes back to sleep,
    Waiting until the time is right once more.




    Submitted on 2011-04-03 10:08:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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