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    dots Submission Name: Pablo the disectordots
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    Author: Cannablisjunkie
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Indianapolis, IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 77/147/87
    Words: 281
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 651
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    dotsPablo the disectordots
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    I just need to save my pieces on the net for security purposes. Enjoy, I\'ma lay \'em down when I find a swag producer. @@@ twitter.com/cannablissXL

    pretty new bitch petite freak in the sheets yes
    mind by the throat got me feelin\' pretty helpless.
    I got a pretty new bitch petite freak in the sheets yes

    my old bitch is mad made bad decisions,
    to split paths pushin\' me away, and then is
    immediately regrettin\' her new found direction
    now got bad feelings she shouldn\'t of even had
    and I think she didn\'t deserve it
    her hearts just confused with the best intentions.
    I swear to fuck I\'m sorry how it all had worsened

    But, newnew is to truely beautiful so I\'d be a damn fool
    ta fuck it up ta
    waste my nut on some otha slut
    when lil D be bad as fuck so... what?

    New-new\'s Fresh than a b-ball pro!
    everytime I see her my jaw hits the floor
    slows down my heart beat every time she approach
    bad as fuck with no clothes in my eyes I know it shows

    that new-new tip rocks socks off my minds been blown.
    I must have that auto subconcious swagger tip a go-go

    Got 100 dolla jeans huggin\' her hips and
    poppin\' what she got while hypnotizin\'\'em
    got my mind n\' body\'s actions by the throat
    I\'m loosin control and then I
    can\'t deny her bodys got me a discombobulated zombie.


    purse n\' panties that juicy n\' vicky tip
    purses fuckin\' tenant is a plump ass wallet restin\'




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