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    Author: Cannablisjunkie
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Indianapolis, IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 77/147/87
    Words: 311
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 732
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2195



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       i'm a silly white kid wit skinny jeans tryin' to make an album 'cause i can. haaaa.


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    I'm a Space-cadet adequet to all my main martians
    we're elevating/exhilerating becoming quite fuckin' starvin'
    knock over a mickey d's 'shut the fuck up' and we won't harm ya'!
    or we'll plant ya in the dirt like a midwestern farmer.





    We've got people to see many places to be
    finn'a cop a few 40's skate on down the street
    rockin' hip-hop beats from out these fuckin' teeth
    words like glorious poetry streaming
    freshly prepped yet
    I'll deny the puss if so it stays wet
    easily surpressin' the flesh yes it's best
    but less attractive when she's so easy to get


    Keep your swag right n' your flags to the left


    I got goons wit me on that other shit
    wrecklessly persistent with killin' it
    fagget bitch azz niggaz make me jump stupid
    make shit pop off real fuckin' quick
    and it triggers me subconciously to plan out my strategy
    to end your life leaving your body completely
    fucking empty of your vital liquid and liabilities with me champ.

    and leave your body derived of
    with one look ge
    it'll be immediate.


    spontaneous speed demons with much needed affection
    need help with their a.d.h.d problems with medication
    with guide lines illistrating
    a noose and an practitioner assisting with the chair

    we need strategic guide lines illistrating us
    you must have something to believe in or we're sinners
    intimate when appropriate







    Gut shell pack well with don till the smoke smell
    attracts fiends n' females that love to tell
    tall-tales of pretty girls n' sea shells
    ridin' blue whales chuckin' deuce to all hells peoples!

    I'm just playin' but, for realz
    I've got many stories like this





    Submitted on 2011-04-03 17:27:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i didnt understand, but i enjoyed the flow!?
    | Posted on 2011-04-09 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]


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