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    dots Submission Name: Reflection of Lovedots

    Author: Forthwind
    ASL Info:    29/male/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 256
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsReflection of Lovedots

    As I walk through the the valley of the shadow of death, I walk down the streets just to find a pile of ash. I look all around and see nothing in sight til something shakes from the ground I stand. It was then, that I seen the light...when a dove shot from the ash like an arrow of might. The dark clouds spread thin like they were never there, all in an instance the sun shone its light again. The dead trees with wilted leaves turn to color again, the black water shook with a ripple that turned bright blue. The earth started to quake with a slight tremor, the dust and clay shook as little blades of green grass started to rise with a glistening shimmer. I look up as the dove fly's overhead again and just as my eyes meet the sky the light of the sun burst across the sky, painting a beautiful orange-blue design. The clouds started to move again, the shadows return to normal being lit up by the sun. I walked over to edge of a lake and look at my reflection. What I see brings tears to my eyes...something I've longed to see for so many years. My heart speeds up and the beats begin to steady again. My color returns to normal as I show a smile for the first time in many years. In that water I saw my hearts desires. I saw you by my side...what I saw was a reflection of love.

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