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    dots Submission Name: True Beautydots

    Author: Forthwind
    ASL Info:    29/male/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsTrue Beautydots

    I woke up this morning and wanted to feel the brisk morning air. As I stepped out I could smell the sweet jasmine in the dew that was not yet completely gone. I walked out into the yard to feel the grass between my toes....so soft, damp and still yet warm. A soft breeze blows by and the leaves fall from the trees. I look up to see the suns rays shining through the trees. So pretty..the clouds drift slowly while changing form to shape the blue morning sky. This seem almost the perfect start to a day and just when I think this I hear the sweet sound of birds. I turn to see and as I do the sun shines through the tree to form a beam of light on the porch and the birds fly through it...I almost feel complete as I close my eyes to enjoy God's splendor and when I open them I see the most beautiful sight I've ever seen...God's work at it's finest and I know that in that moment I see the standard for which all things that are beautiful strive to be like and never even come close...I see you :)

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