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    dots Submission Name: Was it necessary?dots

    Author: ShiveringFire
    Elite Ratio:    4.9 - 328/84/22
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsWas it necessary?dots

    Finally the lightning split down
    the old palsied tree
    with a marauding intensity
    But was it necessary?

    Your songs still drift in the air
    causing ripples, dense and large
    but they are already needleworked
    into my souls tapestry
    so i ask my dear, was it necessary?

    Did you see that tree turning into granite
    Did you see my heart turning into quartz
    God bless you, our ruins are happy
    But i ask my love, was it necessary?

    Submitted on 2011-04-06 13:53:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      what an odd day for me to read this...

    yesterday was my second ex wife's birthday...

    we are still in touch, still close, but when we were together it was like a storm...

    and that storm struck us both down all too often... till all the trees that made us strong were felled...
    yet the memory lingers like a song sewn into our souls..

    we are yet connected and always will be...

    timely for me to read this...

    and such a well woven piece...

    thank you for this

    | Posted on 2011-04-07 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      An often asked question. However I couldn't quite understand, were u asking if the person doing something good or bad or both, was necessary?

    I think nothing in the world is exactly necessary, we could do nothing but eat and sleep, however where is the FUN in that?
    | Posted on 2011-04-06 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]

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