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    dots Submission Name: Or in the likeness and image of God we are made ofdots

    Author: col13x
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsOr in the likeness and image of God we are made ofdots

    As dust, the particles of life
    The light spirit traversed
    In those rhythms and essences of eternal
    As they came upon each other
    Discovering one another

    And through all the myriads of touch
    Kissed within the creations of Goddess and Gods
    We recognised each other

    Some call it love

    And such a dance was hailed to weave itself
    Through the atoms of our soul
    That we knew and did not know

    But still I fell into your eyes
    As you fall into my arms
    And every word unspoken sits on the quiver of your lips
    And every nuance of its translation
    Echoes in my fingertips

    Some call it destiny

    And I held you, a burning torch of proof
    In my heart could swell, you, and nothing more
    That I, this man made of flesh and blood
    Could hold in his hand
    Eternity in his heart

    Light you were and love you are
    Flame of me
    Flame of yourself

    And some …. some call it ……….. desire

    Which clenched in the palm of dampened sheets
    Hung poised with the ache
    A hand entwined around your naked thigh
    And I could not kiss you
    For each breath of me
    Was you

    And in the animal skin
    The heated press
    And the parted curtain

    Some would call it …. Wanton

    In the way you needed
    And your eyes could devour me with such a hunger
    Held me entranced; witch of the hour

    When I bathed in your glory
    Between breast and gasp
    Where you wrote the hymn of us
    So triumphantly sung
    And God upon this ever-spiritual throne


    And knew the passions
    Of human

    And there in the equilibrium
    Between spirit and skin and the divine pendulum
    There in the heart of the fire
    And the pulse pounding vein of blood
    We did not deny how we were made or who we are

    Or in the likeness and image of God
    We are made of

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      Best poem I've read in awhile. If not your intention, this is what I got from it. That we are as we are, an embodiment of a deity judging us for all of our actions, when it is his desire that we have desire, and in a sense resisting design. And that the love can share spritually, is not like the love humans are capable of sharing, which is of the flesh.
    I've said it earlier, but I love your work.
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    | Posted on 2011-04-29 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]

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