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Submission Name: Fade dots

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Author:	grimmreaper
Elite Ratio:	8 - 122/43/23
Words:	68

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	337
Average Vote:	3.5000
Bytes:	602

Description:

Fade

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I

Feel

Like

I

Am

Fading

Inside

Each

Day

I

Am

Forced

To

Live

Is

A

Day

That

I

Am

Being

Made

To

Bare

The

Pain

Of

Your

absence

Submitted on 2011-04-09 16:29:07 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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a lover's lament told here in most unique and different fashion than most... interesting and entirely intriguing piece of poetry...fine stuff....
| Posted on 2011-04-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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