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Fade


Author: grimmreaper
Elite Ratio:    8 - 122 /43 /23
Words: 68
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
Total Views: 743
Average Vote:    3.5000
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Description:




Fade



I

Feel

Like

I

Am

Fading

Inside



Each

Day

I

Am

Forced

To

Live

Is

A

Day



That

I

Am

Being

Made



To

Bare

The

Pain

Of

Your

absence




Submitted on 2011-04-09 16:29:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  a lover's lament told here in most unique and different fashion than most... interesting and entirely intriguing piece of poetry...fine stuff....
| Posted on 2011-04-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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