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    dots Submission Name: Fadedots
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    Author: grimmreaper
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 122/43/23
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 316
    Average Vote:    3.5000
    Bytes: 602



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    dotsFadedots
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    I

    Feel

    Like

    I

    Am

    Fading

    Inside



    Each

    Day

    I

    Am

    Forced

    To

    Live

    Is

    A

    Day



    That

    I

    Am

    Being

    Made



    To

    Bare

    The

    Pain

    Of

    Your

    absence




    Submitted on 2011-04-09 16:29:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      a lover's lament told here in most unique and different fashion than most... interesting and entirely intriguing piece of poetry...fine stuff....
    | Posted on 2011-04-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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