Fade

Author: grimmreaper Elite Ratio:    8 - 122 /43 /23 Words: 68

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Fade

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I Feel Like I Am Fading Inside Each Day I Am Forced To Live Is A Day That I Am Being Made To Bare The Pain Of Your absence

Submitted on 2011-04-09 16:29:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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a lover's lament told here in most unique and different fashion than most... interesting and entirely intriguing piece of poetry...fine stuff....

| Posted on 2011-04-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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