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    dots Submission Name: My Lovedots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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       He meant the world to me and forever he will yet the drugs got the best of us and now we have nothing and we can never have anything together because drugs will always be apart of us


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    dotsMy Lovedots
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    Things are never as they seem
    My heart will forever ach for your presences
    However my mind knows better

    I will never allow myself to go back
    Go back I say
    To those drug invested nights
    To those pits of my living hell
    Depression was only the tip of the iceberg
    Suicidal thoughts produced by the sexual abuse I experienced as a child
    From the ongoing drug addiction

    Yet I crawled my way out...
    Alone more than ever now
    Depressed beyond belief
    For I no longer have those drugs I once leaned on
    And of course I no longer have you....

    Which by the way, you meant more to me than any high I felt
    You were my world for I allowed you into mine!
    I took the key to that old rusted lock, unlocked my heart for you

    Each and every day I think you ... of "us"
    Nevertheless my mind stops me from going any further




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      Sweet heart Im so sorry for everything you have gone through. YOU are strong. I believe in you. Anytime you need me you can call day or night. I know now you feel lost. But you are not alone.
    | Posted on 2011-04-12 00:00:00 | by trynfinity | [ Reply to This ]
      this is very intelligent...the missing, the what if thought, the admittance that he was the speaker's world...

    yet that was a dangerous world, a bad world in the end...and i had to get out, get away...

    i take thoughts of you with me...but will never go back there...

    i am a new person...and right now i am my own world...to get better i need just me and me alone.

    read several of your pieces. and you really let it out...this kind of writing can help so many...

    so many others who have been there...may think twice about going back...where we have been helps make us what we are today...but for many of us, the best thing is to stay where we are now...and not go back.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-12 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      this is just.. painful...
    drugs sexual abuse and somehow love.. they just dont go with each other
    but somehow i understand..
    because they say love is blind.. and not only to what one can see but love is also blind to actions.

    | Posted on 2011-04-10 00:00:00 | by Little Gal | [ Reply to This ]


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