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    dots Submission Name: Let him godots
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    Author: Bloodlust86
    ASL Info:    24/F/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 56/49/53
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 841
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsLet him godots
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    I loved a man once
    I trusted a man once
    I confided in a man once
    I needed a man once

    Then I had to forget him
    Could no longer need him
    Could no longer love him
    Could no longer trust him

    I should be crying
    I should be sad
    I should be angry
    I should be hurt

    The pain will go away





    Submitted on 2011-04-12 14:27:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      He was only worth writing about as of moving on.
    Other than that he drowned in oblivion.
    | Posted on 2011-04-18 00:00:00 | by Fannie | [ Reply to This ]
      The pain will go way! Positive thinking! I like it
    | Posted on 2011-04-13 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it alot there a misteak that u nee =d to fix

    keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2011-04-13 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]


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