Left All Alone Without My Light by MyPeriodical

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Author:	MyPeriodical
Elite Ratio:	2.82 - 87/83/115
Words:	82

Class/Type:	Prose/Love
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I didn't go through this, I just write what comes to mind.

Left All Alone Without My Light dots

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Why can't I see...? Everything's dark. Turn on the light-please? Help me out of this darkness, so I will not stumble.

Wait-why do I hear foot-steps? You were right by my side but now I see your shadow walking away! Please babe, wait!

I thought you loved me...why have you left my side? And on top of that, I am without sight. I cannot comprehend any of my own sentiments, and most of all...I can't understand why you left me.

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A classic lover's lament with the classic and always really unanswerable question: Why?? nice work penned straight from the heart I believe.... fine...
| Posted on 2011-04-14 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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