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    dots Submission Name: Troubles in Brusselsdots
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    Author: PaulHudson
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Southend, Essex
    Elite Ratio:    5.56 - 70/71/19
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Limerick/Political
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       I'm not interested in the recession although I do like economics and politics, I just though I'd take a dig at buracrates.. and why not ay! ;-)


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    dotsTroubles in Brusselsdots
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    There once was a man from Brussels who didn't know his apple from truffle. He ate fish eggs with the money he begged and now we're all living on offal.




    Submitted on 2011-04-12 19:05:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you must be warned to poke or joke a requisition form needs wrote. no wait i must haste i meant to say written, i will now give myself the mandated punishment.
    | Posted on 2011-04-12 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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