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    dots Submission Name: Rotten Eggs Make A Messdots
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    Author: PaulHudson
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Southend, Essex
    Elite Ratio:    5.56 - 70/71/19
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 339
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 256



    Description:
       Sir Thomas ran an inquest into the 2010 expenses scandal that the media loved and the tax payer hated.

    For our non-UK residents, one politician bought a duck house and another, dirty movies at a hotel on thier Parlementary expenses bill.

    Frankly, I don't care. It's just rather funny.


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    dotsRotten Eggs Make A Messdots
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    All of Sir Thomas and all of his men
    couldn't put expences together again.
    So under the bridge went the muck,
    the dirty mags and homes for ducks.
    Lapping over the shoes of Brown
    flushed out England, Puaper and Crown.




    Submitted on 2011-04-12 19:28:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cute piece, but check the spellings...takes away from it to edit as a reader...

    but other than that, short and sweet...

    like a political nursery rhyme ought to be...

    short and sweet...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-12 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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