Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Sullen Woodsdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: PaulHudson
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Southend, Essex
    Elite Ratio:    5.56 - 70/71/19
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 5260
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 415



    Description:
       I live opposite a small wood. Woods always have a unique sense of presence about them. Everything is alive, organic but organised and logical, it's a small system of plants, trees, seeds, birds, squirrels and the odd badger. We go in, see, smell, hear and you really do 'come out' of them like waking from a trance. I don't say it to be poetic, that's how it feels.

    Here's me in a wood stripped bare by autumn.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSullen Woodsdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Trodden dirt and thread bare grass
    Silent pools, silty, stagnant past
    Blotched skys move no where fast
    suns glowing warmth has past

    Squirrels search for acrons to retreive
    From tied branches, bare of leafs
    While birds flick about the ground
    their aurgent hunt without a sound

    Wonderful washed and sullen woods
    about which, I am stood. 




    Submitted on 2011-04-12 19:38:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      by the way...

    one of the best Titles for a poem...

    "Sullen Woods"

    wonderful.
    | Posted on 2011-04-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      i think after so many failed relationships...we tend to stand still in the middle of a sullen woods...and all the sounds, once so beautiful, become a depressing din...that hurts our ears as well as our hearts.

    careful of spellings...they are unwanted stops...but a really nice tight piece..visual and stuff...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-04-13 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    190393

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    prison written by ShyOne
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    Carry written by saartha
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    Etiquette written by saartha
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry