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    dots Submission Name: One Daydots

    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsOne Daydots

    One day Ill find a love so true
    Be forever happy, never blue
    As I wait my turn in loves long queue
    One day I vow, one day

    One day Ill raise my head up high
    Allow myself to laugh or cry
    I will not let life pass me by
    One day I vow, one day

    One day Ill bloom and stand so tall
    Fearing nothing, conquer all
    Admired much by one and all
    One day I vow, one day

    One day Ill live and smile so well
    No more my life an empty shell
    Im bound for heaven not for hell
    One day I vow, one day

    One day Ill set my spirit free
    Eyes wide open and Ill see
    The person I was meant to be
    One day I vow, one day

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      yeah! loved it!

    and that one day cant wait to see me... i am reclining, it is smiling, we both are happy.

    ha ha i found it pretty inspiring thanks for this high your words gave me.
    | Posted on 2011-04-19 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      one day i'll fall in love as well! i can practicly taste it... beautiful peice
    | Posted on 2011-04-17 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]
      Delightful! This is both practically philosophical, and fun to read. "One day" is a common thought to mankind, as we all have so much that is going to be done or changed "one day".

    The skill with which the poem is written is masterful, with graceful poetry expertly expressing the message in the poem.

    Outstanding work as always Frank! I enjoyed reading this one!
    | Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good thought, well written. Make the one day today, waiting may make one miss the opportunity of a life time.
    | Posted on 2011-04-15 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a commendable declaration piece about establishing and holding confidence forever.
    With remaining earnest.

    Immediately likable, nice.Trust in oneself to do right with promise can be an amazing thing.


    | Posted on 2011-04-14 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]

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