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    dots Submission Name: In grace's sadness!dots
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    Author: blossomswilt
    ASL Info:    15/m
    Elite Ratio:    1.46 - 1/4/4
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsIn grace's sadness!dots
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    This might be short, but as said to one
    Just be happy! :)
    For when the day comes when someone's there to help you
    you will see the real happiness.
    So as this one might be fake, just realize what is at stake.
    Those who do love and those who do care,
    so just here me out just this once and let the grace be within the sadness!
    -Blossomswilt-




    Submitted on 2011-04-14 18:52:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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