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    dots Submission Name: won the fightdots

    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotswon the fightdots

    i made my choice tonight
    i learned to stick up for myself in a fight
    i cant take back the words i flung at him
    nor can i block out the words he said to me
    they sting, they dig deep
    but i cant put up with this anymore
    he kept on dragging me to the floor
    i thought that life used to look pretty on my knees
    but now that ive got my steel back
    the world is much more beautiful for me
    its going to take time
    before i find myself in someone elses arms
    but for now i know what i must do
    i must move on, i must heal
    i cant think about the what ifs
    cause none of that is fair
    i need to patch up my broken heart
    and learn that theirs nothing wrong with myself
    and i know that when i reach that point
    everything will fall into place
    so for now im savoring the lonely night
    cause i know that for once
    i stood up for myself and actually won the fight.

    Submitted on 2011-04-15 00:37:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow! you have impressed my inner wolf

    just kidding!

    hope everything is okay!
    | Posted on 2011-04-19 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      we all need some self-pride don't we? nice!
    | Posted on 2011-04-15 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]

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