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    dots Submission Name: The </3 Valentinesdots

    Author: Queen_of_spades
    ASL Info:    21/F/Nocturne
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 95/166/107
    Words: 356
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 574
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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       These were all originally anonymous valentines that I wrote under the signature of '</3' for this last valentine's day. I'm not much for the holiday itself, but it proved to be a rather nice creative outlet for awesomely psychotic and gory short poems. The people who received them typically reacted rather well, at least. :}

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    dotsThe </3 Valentinesdots

    My dear love, I won't shed a tear
    I promise I will stay right here...
    I'll stay outside this room
    waiting for you to seal your doom...
    and once I finally have you in my arms
    I'll be the only one to cause you harm.

    Well you are interesting, yes indeed...
    Did you think you were the same as me?
    I'll delight to murder you with my own hands,
    they won't pray for such a man.
    A greater pleasure knows no bounds...
    I'll dance to your screams, I love the sounds.
    So please, my dear, scream a little more,
    no one will hear you underneath my floor...

    I know that you don't understand
    Why I cut off your wedding hand
    But my love, you can't belong to anyone else
    I love the way you have always knelt
    so submissive to this oppressive hell
    My love for you is wrong in all the right ways
    so just lay still while I appraise
    The beautiful rubies pouring from your skin
    As I lick your wound and lift up your chin...

    The gore that is painted on your face
    seems as fragile as antique lace.
    I will keep returning to taste your porcelain flesh
    for you, my dear, are sweeter than death.
    Roses, cracked and dead...
    they hold no candle to the beauty
    of how much you've bled...
    I am the proprietor of your demise,
    so much sadness lies in your cold dead eyes.
    While you do entice me so,
    the knife through your heart will I never let go...

    I think of you at night, like needles in my heart.
    Your blood still stains my hands,
    you've always been a tart.
    I hope you know that I'm not done,
    I hope you are excited.
    You will let me cut your skin,
    oh yes, I was invited...
    And though I may not leave you alive,
    I'll definitely leave my mark-
    For you are the most lovely victim I've ever seen-
    dying in the dark...

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