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    dots Submission Name: Poisondots

    Author: Queen_of_spades
    ASL Info:    21/F/Nocturne
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 95/166/107
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 607
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       This is a few years old, written in the present about the emotions of the past. This was a dramatic (though very accurate) experiment with an oxford english dictionary.

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    Dear poison, with your acrid kiss
    Pressing salted pleasure upon cut lips
    Contorting the whim of everlasting desire
    With ecliptic hands and eyes of fire
    You addle the aberrant mind
    Depicting happiness with you to find
    In time you'll decimate this fractured soul
    Impugn upon life's existence in whole

    Dark poison share your poisonous vine
    Tell me of its bitter sweet taste of wine
    For I wish to live, to know
    Thrive, feel, and learn to grow
    Give me what I so desire and need
    Ingest, devour, engulf with ease
    Your given pleasures, the memories they create
    I give all of myself for you to take
    As it's better to die having loved in vain
    Than live forever without receiving your pain

    So let me drink of your deleterious gift
    Tremble at your infectious caress and kiss
    Bend with your passion's ember of desire
    Burn deep within love's forbidden fire
    Confuse my wandering consciousness
    Reflecting an apparition of happiness
    Only in time to destroy this constricted soul
    Letting pain invade the remnants of loves fool

    Dear poison, share your poisonous vine
    Fill me of its acrid taste of wine
    For if I am to breathe, to live
    Let me feel the warmth overtake within
    As it's better to die having loved in vain
    Than live forever never knowing your lust, your name.

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