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    dots Submission Name: Do Not Fear The Unstoppabledots
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    Author: AshleyDYoung
    ASL Info:    19/F/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 28/33/34
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsDo Not Fear The Unstoppabledots
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    Im not afraid to walk this night, lose my sight
    Or face the next mornings light.
    Not anymore I do not fear, death is now near;
    It will now consume and it will be hell,
    but all is well. Im not afraid
    to walk down my path this night
    Its long and hard,
    but when that clock strikes seven
    I will be in hell or my lords heaven.
    Its six thirty now and still I do not fear,
    I can feel it coming near;
    Closer and closer
    its here.




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